Shelagh Stephenson’s play at Hampstead Theatre, which also saw her Experiment with an Air Pump and Memory of Water,
has just opened and I saw it last night. I like Shelagh’s work; she’s
ambitious, serious, thoughtful and daring. She thinks big; she thinks
about the world we’re in and tries to tell new stories. This play had
its first (?) showing at the Peacock Theatre in Dublin five years ago
and London’s only getting it now.
In Enlightenment,
a young man, travelling on his gap year, has gone missing and his
parents have endured six painful months with no idea what has happened
to him. Horrifyingly, he disappeared around the time of a terrorist
attack on a tourist bar. When, out of the blue, they received a
phonecall from a British consulate in the far East, they rush to meet
him from the airport. But that boy who greets them as mum and dad is
unknown to them. Who is this amnesiac boy? They uncertainly take him
into their lives but it seems he is playing games with them, cruelly
toying with their feelings, while working out his own self-destructive
pathology. Through the final violent confrontation between this boy and
the mother, the couple seem finally to begin to move on.
The play is generous in its thought and
feeling. It’s about grief, but it’s also about global travel, the ‘clash
of civilisations’, the way people exploit one another, reason vs.
superstition, private lives lived in the public eye, the complex motives
that lay hidden in the slightest transaction. The end of the first act
is a nicely plotted twist and the complications of the second pull you
into the story.
For all that, I found it oddly hard to
engage with. I think the main thing is that the ideas were right on the
surface of the play. When people thought things, they said them. This
meant that the scenes and characters didn’t seem to have much depth or
complexity; there was no subtext to keep us tugging along. True, there’s
a bit more in the second half where we’re kept guessing about the boy’s
motives, but actually I sensed - correctly as it turned out - that we
weren’t ever going to know quite why the boy was acting the way he was,
so even then I wasn’t prepared to get stuck into the mystery. (The boy
says a number of horrible things to them - none of which appeared
particularly true: when he claims to have fucked their son, they flinch
and he goes into a rant about their liberalism not allowing them to
picture the homosexual act. I don’t particularly relish thinking about
my parents having sex; doesn’t mean I am secretly disgusted with
heterosexuality. He also cuts himself, which felt, if I’m honest, more
about a strong visual image than anything lucid about the kid’s problems
or motives.) At one point, Joyce says ‘It’s an English thing. Never say
what you mean’ and I found myself wishing that was more of that English
thing here.
In addition, the language was rather dry
in places; written, rather than spoken. Symptomatic of this was the
vocabulary of the characters that suggested to me the lexicon of an
academic more than the kind of words that people ordinarily use -
perceptible, conjecture, hypothetical, surrepetitious are just some
examples - and they came out at moments where I wanted more of a sense
of their pain than their nuanced reading of the situation.
The partner of that dryness was the
play’s stasis. In Act I, the characters are, naturally enough, stuck and
unmoving. But their eloquence somehow undermined that. The first scene
has the family - she enthusiastically, he reluctantly - consulting a
psychic (sorry ‘sensitive’) to find her son. Curiously, when you might
have expected a sense of expectation, tension, the mother daring to hope
for a breakthrough but also steeled for disappointment, caught between
belief and scepticism, and so on, all of that potential is squandered in
words. The mother doesn’t even shut up when Joyce is trying to listen
to the voices.
There are other odd moments like this,
characters seeming to drift away from the urgency of the situation to
reflect on the world. Most bizarrely this happens in the last scene;
there’s a boy with a hospitalisable injury on the floor and while the
scene begins with an ambulance being called and some anxiety for his
wellbeing, the couple start chatting away almost forgetting the bleeding
youth on their floor. Explanations could be given for that, though I
was quite baffled by the choreography of the end of Act I. They’re
waiting in a private room for Adam. The boy’s grandfather has asked his
girlfriend (maybe) to meet the boy off the plane and bring him to them.
Apparently this is because they don’t want to be reunited on camera (but
why the girlfriend? We’ve already established that the mother hates
her). Then it gets weirder. The girlfriend has a sign with his name on
and leaves. Then a few minutes later, she has apparently met him but
rushes in alone, saying he’s coming. What happened? She said hello,
pointed at the door then ran off ahead of him? Didn’t make sense to me,
nor could I see what dramaturgical convenience it served.
Finally, it’s a class thing. The
characters were very wealthy, very bourgeois. Now I have no problem with
the upper-middle classes being shown on stage and I guess there’s an
image here of the guilty rich looking fearfully at the rest of the
world, wondering if they are admired or envied, aspired to or hated; but
this production certainly made them seem like a right pair of cunts,
insufferable, snooty, pleased with themselves, self-involved. There’s
something that annoys me about wine on stage; it’s often a sign of
something, always a class indicator, suggesting a bit of bohemianism,
especially if it’s red, especially if somebody mentions the grape. Wine
on stage seems to be stuck in 1972. I suppose I felt that this play,
which is asking about the kind of world we live in, wondering about the
permanence and relevance of western values, the continuation of the
Enlightenment Project perhaps, seemed myopically trapped within its own
class bubble, really not seeing anything beyond it. Fine if that were
just the couple, less good when it feels like the play too.
I haven’t read the play and it may be
that I’ve been led astray by a curiously unsympathetic production - the
set rather sterile, the acting rather disengaged I felt - and the play’s
better than it could be. Certainly there were some aberrant line
readings. I like Shelagh’s plays; this one didn’t do it for me.